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Mr Gatsby and Me

He reaches out to
the green light at end of the bay,
his arm trembling a little,
his dark silhouette showing no emotion
save for his hand. 
I reach out to
the wall in my room,
my hand trembling a little,
my emotions are clear
written by the tears on my face. 
One could say that Gatsby and I
are one in the same.
One could say that we’re not.
Both Gatsby and I are driven
by our hope.
We cling on to that last remaining bit of it
for the sake of our dreams. 
For Gatsby it’s Daisy and the American Dream
for me it’s my career and the need to be loved.
They hurt us with their words
and hurt us more with their lack thereof.
We try to fit into their way of life,
but we both know it’s not what we really want. 
Yes, you could say that Gatsby and I
are the same, but there’s one thing
that makes us different.
Gatsby died with hope still in him
he never gave up on anything.
I fear that I will die without hope,
my optimism shattered by their rules.

Tiger's Curse by Colleen Houk


Passion. Fate. Loyalty. 
Would you risk it all to change your destiny?The last thing Kelsey Hayes thought she'd be doing this summer was trying to break a 300-year-old Indian curse. With a mysterious white tiger named Ren. Halfway around the world. 
But that's exactly what happened. 
Face-to-face with dark forces, spell-binding magic, and mystical worlds where nothing is as it seems, Kelsey risks everything to piece together an ancient prophecy that could break the curse forever. 
Tiger's Curse is the exciting first novel in an epic fantasy-romance that will leave you breathless and yearning for more.


Firstly, this book didn't leave me "breathless and yearning for more". It left me tired and bored and slightly mad. I have this thing that when something shocking or annoying happens in a book I start talking to it. Let's just say that I could not keep my mouth shut while reading this book. 
I bought the book firstly because of the beautiful cover and secondly because it's set in India.  I find India such a magical, mystical place and I thought that this book might feed my imagination a bit more. It did, until it started to get cliched and redundant. The first few chapters were amazing, it spoke about a curse and fulfilling prophecies. I thought that with a book this thick it must be filled with adventure and wonderful tales from ancient India. Then came the clear love story forming between Ren and Kelsey, which we all saw coming, but I felt as if Houk focused more on their love story and Kelsey fighting with her feelings rather than Kelsey trying to help Ren free himself from this 300-year-old curse.
Okay, so I think I just gave away a significant plot point over there, but, like I said before, we all saw it coming. Ren is an ancient Indian Prince (his full name being Dihren) who ends up becoming a tiger because he is in possession of a piece of the Damon Amulet. This curse only allows him to change back into human form for 24 minutes in one day, basically a minute for every hour. The only way for the curse to be broken is for Durga's chosen one to be found, enter Kelsey Hayes typical awkward American girl with no intention of breaking a curse or falling in love. I say typical because I think that almost every American author of this genre picks this archetype for their protagonist. Thinks herself to be average in appearance,but described by others as beautiful, pale skinned, unsure of herself, not very outgoing and has had something happen to her parents, in Kelsey's case her parents died in a car accident. I've seen and read it so many times before in films and books. I understand that this is what teenage girls relate to most, but it somehow makes the story more unrealistic than watching anything on TLC or any other "reality TV" network. The things I admire about Kelsey are, and yes there are things I like about her, her bravery, loyalty and the way she cares for others before herself. She's a sweet girl and if I had met her in real life I probably would be (distant) friends with her, there's nothing you can hate about her, except for when she becomes lovelorn Kelsey torn about her feelings for Ren. The other thing that would probably drive someone up the wall is that she asks way too many questions, even I don't ask that many questions. I understand that she is a curious person and curious people's brains need to be constantly fed with information, but there's a point where it just becomes a sort off info-dump where you just need to get the information out for the sake of the story. I've been accused of doing it before, it's hard to weave in important facts through dialogue and narration while also allowing the story to flow, but a good writer should know when and how to show that information. 
Sorry, I got a bit lost there. The thing I love most about this novel is the fact that it's based in India and it is filled with Indian mythology. The culture of India really shows through in certain places and the jungles make a great backdrop for most of the novel. The story relies heavily on the tales of the Hindi Gods, specifically Durga, the one who's curse must be broken, she is known to ride a tiger (sometimes a lion) and is often depicted in battle against demons. Of all the Hindi Goddesses, you do not want to mess with her. Hannuman, the monkey God, is also mentioned as they have to entire his realm and retrieve the golden fruit as one part of Durga's prophecy. As a part Tamil, part Telegu, and my mum being religious, it was interesting to see how someone from America who was not Indian herself retold these ancient tales without mocking it in anyway. Kelsey's curiosity made the reader more absorbed in the stories, Kelsey was open minded and that made the reader more comfortable to be open minded. I was never that religious, although I always wear my red string with pride and go whenever we go to Temple, but after reading some these stories I started to ask my mum questions about them. It made me realise how brilliant this religion really was with all our different Gods and what they all stand for. 
The character I liked the most was Mr Kadam, the wise mentor of Ren. There's just something about him that made him seem so knowledgeable, obviously because he was the one telling Kelsey about the curse, but he also has that air about him. Like you could ask him any question and he will answer honestly. I would imagine that he would be comfortable either in a library with floor to ceiling bookshelves or drafting up a battle plan against the enemy. Kelsey sees him as a grandfatherly figure and, in my opinion, the book would've been dry without him. I would like to see more of Kishan, Ren's younger brother who was also cursed, in the next novels. I love his wit and charm and it would be interesting to see more of the dynamic he has with his older brother. 
Tiger's Curse in a nutshell: Mystical, Adventurous and a lot of romance. Seriously, don't read it if you can't handle the love-lust of a nineteen year old girl. It's the perfect novel for someone who likes romance with a bit of adventure mixed in, although I prefer my books as adventures with a bit of romance mixed in. If you're not one to start a series of novels and have to read every book in the series, then give the first book a go and see if you like it by the end.

Wild Beauty

The sidewalk is filled with people walking by, ignoring everything and everyone around them. A woman’s face looks down at me. Her hair is all sorts of different colours and her eyes show signs of sadness. She stares at me, unblinking. A giant piece of artwork for everyone to see, but no one notices. I take a quick picture with my camera and tuck safely back in my bag.


A Woman by David Walker
Suddenly, the woman winks at me and shrinks down to face me. Her body is a black outline and her hair flows in the wind as she beckons me closer. I move towards her, cautious at first, but then more confident.
“Hi,” I say, “Who are you?” She remains silent, still beckoning me closer toward her. I move closer, still a bit careful. Suddenly, she starts running away, her dress flying behind her and her bare feet thumping on the sidewalk. I follow her quickly, trying to keep up with her pace.

She leads me to a corner street where two cartoon boys are playing basketball. She runs up to them and whispers in their ears. They both look at me in and drop their ball. It bounces on the grey sidewalk and rolls down the street leaving a trail of orange behind. I want to go after it, but the boys stop me, shaking their heads.  One turns to his friend and says something inaudible. His friend laughs and they all run off down the street.

 I follow them again; curious to see what was so interesting that they would just abandon their game of basketball. The colourful woman leads the way as we pass dozens of bare grey walls. As they run past them, they leave splashes of colour. Bright pinks and blues and purples. I watch in awe as the colours mix with each other and start forming shapes. Some of them get up and dance around while others just flop down and change shape.

We finally reach another wall with a ballerina, all dressed up in her tutu and up on her tiptoes. The two basket ballers stop and try to copy her, one on either side. She abruptly breaks and looks at both of them with burning disgust. They put their hands up innocently and hide behind the colourful woman. The woman says something, using her entire body to convey her message and the ballerina’s expression softens. I try to lean in closer to hear what they are saying, but they notice and start running away again.
“Wait,” I say, “I’m not going to hurt you.” I follow them again as the streets get quieter and the walls more colourful. Where could they possibly be going?

I finally catch up with them on a deserted warehouse wall. At first, it’s just the four of them talking. The ballerina going spins and the basketball players trying to show her some hip hop moves. Then more and more people start some. Some outlines of strange creatures, others silhouettes of lovers and even a blue owl. I watch in amazement as SpongeBob and a Victorian industrial worker share a refreshing drink with a rainbow unicorn.  Charlie Chapman starts tap dancing around everyone and I can see distinctive black shoeprints being left behind by his shoes. He tips his hat at me and I bow gracefully. I watch as more and more characters arrive. Before I know it, the dirty grimy warehouse wall is magical blend of colours and imagination. 

I pull out my camera to take a picture of the fantastical scene happening before my eyes and just as the camera flashes, the image captured forever, the wall is grey again. Everyone has disappeared and I am left to wander the streets alone.

Top left: Ballerina (artist unknown) Top middle:
Girl (artist unknown) Top Right: Three Old Men
(artist unknown) Bottom Left: Well-dressed man by
Nick Walker. Bottom Right: Blue Owl (on a wall in Atlanta)
Author's Note:
I seem to have a lot of these notes at the end of my essays, but sometimes I feel it necessary to tell you where I get my inspiration from and how one thought could lead to another. "Wild Beauty" was a topic given in our English creative writing exam. I had written on a different topic, but when I was thinking about the topics later on I thought of this as a descriptive. So, ten at night, I Google searched "street art" and I drew inspiration from the pictures above. I wan't originally going to post this, but I decided to give it a try. I've always been fascinated by street art ever since I saw a mural at the end of Cowey Road in the Berea, Durban. Every time we go to visit my dad's mother I know I'm going to see that wall and every time it's a different painting. I have no idea who paints and if it is the same person every time, but it does put a smile on my face. It's always interesting to hear people's views on Street art, some say it isn't an art form and people shouldn't do it, where as others, like me, believe it to be a way of beautifying a dull world. That's what I tried to capture in the essay above and really hope I succeeded. 

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